4 panel page for Amelbury
p1- Ormer and Ann are walking down the path while talking
Ann: "How'd they know the flakes tasted gross?"
Ormer: "One of the halfling actors mentioned in a behind the scenes interview that the fans they used would blast the fake snow right into his mouth!"
p2- closeup of Ormer with his hand outstretched in a fruity way
Ormer: "They had to reshoot that scene like six or seven times."
p3- closeup of Ann
Ann: "and reset the snow each time too?"
p4- Ormer and Ann have reached a door to a building. Ormer has his hands behind his head.
Ormer: "Yeah, that was also the only movie with snow. So I think they learned from the experience!"
4 panel comic page
p1- Ann has her hand on the door, ready to open in,, but she's looking back at Ormer.
Ann: "you sure they don't care if we just walk in?"
p2- she has now opened the door.
Ormer: "Positive!"
p3- the door closes with a click
p4- a wide shot of the inside of a lecture hall. there are rows of seats, sparsely populated while the orator is lecturing.
offscreen voice: "'How did this mineral get here?' you may ask--"
Chapter 3, pg 69 and 70 #AMELBURY
05.03.2026 23:48
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two page spanning splash page. the image is a wide shot of a campus, and Ormer and Ann walking along a path from a parking lot. Ormer is talking with Ann.
Ormer: "There's this one scene where the characters climbed up the side of a snowy mountain, and there's an avalanche so they had to build a whole set with fake snow made from these gross tiny salty flakes!"
Chapter 3, pg 67 and 68 #AMELBURY
27.02.2026 00:46
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4 panel comic page for Amelbury
p1- the tall student THUNKs against the ground from her friend knocking her over. Her friend's screams can be heard trailing off in the distance as she stares in horror above
p2- a shadow is cast over her as her face grows in horror
p3- a closeup of her face in fear as it's entirely covered in shadow
p4- all black panel
one panel comic page
p1- the tall student is seen in the distance, hands up, as she screams in fear and runs away. in the foreground are a bag, wallet, and skateboard that the two of them left behind.
Chapter 3, pg 65 and 66 #AMELBURY
19.02.2026 22:08
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Amelbury comic page comprised of 4 panels
p1- Two university students running through a wooded trail while laughing
p2- a closeup of the shorter of the two
p3- the taller one obviously trailing behind, they begin panting from being winded
p4- the taller student now resting against a tree, she shouts, "W-wait up! I can't keep up!"
4 panel Amelbury comic page
p1- the taller one, now sweating, finally catches up with the shorter one. She puts her hand on their shoulder. She's still panting while they have a look of horror on their face from something off camera.
Taller student: "Good! Finally caught you--"
p2- closeup of the taller one as she looks down
Taller student: "What's wrong?"
p3- the taller student get a look of horror now on her face as she finally notices what the other was looking at.
p4- the shorter one begins screaming and ends up pushing into the taller one out of fear.
Chapter 3, pg 63 and 64 #AMELBURY
13.02.2026 18:28
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Comic page for AMELBURY Chapter 3.
p1- an upward angle showing a flag for South Aus flapping in the wind in front of a sunny sky
p2- a wide shot of a school campus with two figures running towards a forested area
p3- closeup of a shoe stepping with an audible CRUNCH
p4- Two university students, one with a skateboard in hand, running into a wooded trail. they both look like they're having a great time chasing one another.
Chapter 3, pg 62 #AMELBURY
04.02.2026 23:13
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First part of Chapter 3 is up! You can read it here: balileart.neocities.org?pg=32#showCo...
Thank you everyone for the wait!
30.01.2026 04:00
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cover art for Chapter 3 of the webcomic, AMELBURY. the art depicts Ann Ngo standing in a wooded area. She's got a collared shirt with a sports bag slung over her shoulder. She's looking back as if something is happening off screen that we are not privy to.
Chapter 3 Cover - The Dropbear Part 1 #AMELBURY
30.01.2026 03:53
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Howdy yall! Thank you all for supporting and reading chapters 1 and 2 of Amelbury! Chapter 3 is coming! The intention is to release it in one big chunk so the update may be slower than previous. Till then, ill try to do some sketches and feel free to ask me about the characters/setting! #AMELBURY
17.12.2025 18:38
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single panel splash page. The panel shows a the street in front of the apartment that Ormer lives at. There's buildings in the background, and a large cliff-side in the distance.
the foreground is a silhouette of the characters on the stairs.
Ormer: "sure."
Chapter 2, pg 57 and 58 #AMELBURY
04.12.2025 09:06
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p1 - a wide shot where we see that across from the steps Ann and Ormer are sitting on are three ibis eating from a trash can
Ann: "So what's your next project?"
p2 - closer look at the ibis
p3- Ormer resting his head solemnly on his hand
Ormer: "Just some lighting stuff."
p4- another Ibis who is standing on the trash can. it lets out a KWOK
p1 - Ann looking at Ormer who is off screen
Ann: "Do you need help?"
p2 - Ormer: "But, you know I can't pay."
p3-4 - Ann beginning to stand up
Ann: "Doesn't matter, filming with you was fun and saving that cat felt warm and fuzzy. So?"
Chapter 2, pg 55 and 56 #AMELBURY
27.11.2025 19:11
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new #AMELBURY page(s) up: balileart.neocities.org
21.11.2025 00:27
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p1 - flat shot of Ann and Ormer on the stairs
Ann: "Rough."
Ormer: "Yeah- Sorry."
p2 - another angle of Ann looking over at her friend, her hands clasped together.
Ann: "Why'd you decide on superheroes? Why not fantasy or something?"
p3 - Ormer giving a look of confusion at the quesiton he was just asked.
Ormer: "What?"
p1 - Ann once again.
Ann: "You said your parents worked on fantasy movies, so Why'd you choose superheroes?"
p2-3 - Ormer is taken aback by her qestion before turning his head away.
Ormer: "I- Because they're cool."
p4 - a closeup of his face.
Ormer: "And they can stop bad things happening to people."
Chapter 2, pg 53 and 54 #AMELBURY
21.11.2025 00:25
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p1 - Ann and Ormer continue to rest on the stairs. Ann looks pleased with an empty bowl next to her.
Ormer: "You really ate that up quick."
Ann: ahhh... "You're quite the cook, Ormer."
Ormer: "Thanks."
p2 - Ann looking over
Ann: "You should consider a culinary career if the movie thing doesn't end up working out for you."
p3-4 -
Ormer: "That's what everyone says... My aunt and uncle own a restaurant so people assume I'm just gonna end up working there."
p1-4 - Ormer slouching on the stairs while a series of images show the various images of figures behind the scenes on set of the last Kings of Yore movie. the shots are a silhouette of the director, another shot from a halfing village, and ifnally a massive sinkhole in the middle of a set
Ormer: "But my parents, they worked in Aussiewood on those 'Kings of Yore' movies. While the last one was in production, they mysteriously vanished."
p5 - Ormer looking down sadly
Ormer: "I was too young to remember any of it. I guess movies help me feel closer to them in a way."
Chapter 2, pg 51 and 52 #AMELBURY
13.11.2025 01:50
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a small panel of Ann biting the pasta
POP
the page is a large splash page showing pasta ingredients exploding out from Ann's head as the flavour touches her palette.
p1-2 - Ann is shedding tears
Ann: "Oh my god."
Ormer: "You're crying."
Ann: "That's the best pasta I've ever tasted!"
p3 - Ormer watches as his friend scarfs down his food with a loud SLORP SLURP
Ormer: "Crikey."
Chapter 2, pg 49 and 50 #AMELBURY
06.11.2025 01:11
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#AMELBURY new page(s): balileart.neocities.org
29.10.2025 04:03
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p1 - a wide shot of Ann sitting on some stairs to an apartment complex
p2 - another angle, Ann glances behind her while Ormer heads down the stairs with a dok dok
p3 - He's holding a bowl of piping hot pasta. He's holding with a napkin.
Ormer: "I got pasta!"
Ann: "So why do I have to eat outside?"
Ormer: "'Mates have something going on tonight."
p4 - a closeup of Ormer handing Ann the bowl of pasta.
Ormer: "Careful, it's hot!"
ow ow
Ann: "Thank you!"
p1-2 - Ann scoops up a bite of the pasta as Ormer explains to her what she's eating.
Ormer: "It's fettuccine alfredo, using an old Uomo family recipe."
Ann: mhmm
Ormer: "My aunt and uncle own a restaurant and they let me take some leftover ingredients sometimes."
p3 - a closeup of Ann bringing the pasta to her mouth. Ormer stares closely to see her reaction.
Chapter 2, pg 47 and 48 #AMELBURY
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p1 - Ann clasping a hand on her head while Ormer looks with shame in the background at her
Ann: "Of course! Why'd I expect a university student to have any money?"
p2 - Pinching the bridge of her nose, Ann mutters under her breath "How was I so oblivious?"
p3 - Ormer's guilty face watching.
p4 - Leaping towards her with his hand outstretched, Ormer chases after Ann, who is walking away defeated.
Ann: "Whatever... I'm just going home-"
Ormer: "WAIT!"
p5 - over the shoulder shot of Ann with a hand on her shoulder.
Ormer: "Sorry..."
p1-2 - we view both of them from below, there sky is visible above.
Ormer: "I lied about being able to pay you, and that was really shitty."
a shot of Ormer clasping his hands,
Ormer: "But can I at least make you dinner? As recompense, Maybe?"
p3-4 - various scene shots of the places around them
p5 - Ann: "Fine."
Chapter 2, pg 45 and 46 #AMELBURY
27.10.2025 09:04
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p1-2 - Ann holding up the money in her hand while talking with Ormer
Ann: "That old lady, she gave me $10. Like it's not a lot, but I just quit my job. I'm not gonna say no to some cash."
p3 - a distant shot showing Ann and Ormer facing one another. Birds are chirping to fill the silence.
p4 - a shot of Ormer's concerned face while his heart beats loudly
Ormer: "You don't have a job?"
p1 - Ann bluntly responds
Ann: "Yeah I quit my job today, actually. So I could really use that money you owe me now."
p2-4 - three sequential shots of Ormer making various faces of guilt.
p5 - a distraught, silent look on Ann's face.
Chapter 2, pg 43 and 44 #AMELBURY
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a sketch showing the two main characters, Ormer and Ann, from the comic Amelbury. they are sitting in an apartment while the movie playing one of the most impactful scenes from one of the Kings of Yore movies plays.
Movie: "I can't carry the magic ring... but I can carry you."
pictured: hour 9 of the Kings of Yore Marathon #AMELBURY
24.10.2025 00:24
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New Page(s): balileart.neocities.org
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p1 - both Ormer and the old woman celebrate as Ann slides down the tree with the cat held in her arm
p2 - Ann, annoyed, plops the cat directly into a pleased old woman's arms.
p3 - Ormer shows off his footage to his friend while the cat swipes ferociously in the woman's arms. she excitedly tells Ann, "Thank you so much for getting Everette out of the tree! So many young people don't stop to help anymore."
p4 - "and look how happy he is to be saved!" Everette's face is stretched back as he swipes in panic from being pet a little too forefully.
p1 - Ann looks down, dumbfounded at a couple pieces of paper in her hands. The woman waves as the two heroes leave.
Ormer: "That was awesome! I got all the footage I need for class! You did great out there!"
p2 - Ormer does a jump of excitedment, "And how did you even grab the cat like that?"
p3 - "Those boots are so crazy!" The papers in Ann's hands turn out to be a couple 5 dollar bank notes.
p4 - Ormer is now a bit further from his companion
Ann: "I got $10"
p5 - Ormer turns to look over his shoulder, "Huh?"
Chapter 2, pg 41 and 42 #AMELBURY
23.10.2025 00:48
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p1 - a long panel where Ann draws the cat in using her boot. there's a long DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN across it as the cat zips towards her
p2 - a large panel showing Everette now attached to Ann's boot. He's frazzled from what happened
p3 - A shot of Ormer and the old woman looking on. Ormer shouting, "She did it!" while the old woman is dumbstruck at what she just saw.
Chapter 2, pg 39 and 40 #AMELBURY
22.10.2025 04:03
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p1-2 - the cat, Everette, lands on Ann's head, before jumping off. The force was enough to throw Ann off balance.
p3 - A shot of Ann wobbling on the branch. She's waving her arms wildly to regain balance.
p4-5 - a view of one of her boots attaching to the branch she's on with a loud DUNNNNNN CLUNK. the next is of Ann's surprised eyes.
p6 - a shot of Ann looking down. She thinks aloud, "Huh? Stuck..."
p1- Everette, the cat, moseys down the tree branch. Ann is observing from afar.
p2-4 - the cat sits down and starts licking his paws almost as if to taunt the human pursuing him. Ann's expression is annoyed.
p5 - similar to panel 1, the panel shows Everette in the foreground grooming himself. Ann is sitting down with her foot held up, pointed at the cat.
Chapter 2, pg 37 and 38 #AMELBURY
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p1- Ann with a determined look on her face, a speech bubble coming out of the panel saying "I need money."
p2- a shot showing Ann running across the branch and then using her boots to leap up high. She's doing a confident fist in the air as she does so.
p1- Ann landing on a higher branch of the tree. This time with more grace than her first jump
p2- Ann stepping up after the cat whose been evading her this whole time. The cat continues to leap higher into the tree to avoid her.
p3-4 - two panels showing the cat and Ann staring at one another.
Chapter 2, pg 35 and 36 #AMELBURY
20.10.2025 03:25
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panel 1-3 - Ann is now straddling the branch she's on with her back to the tree trunk itself. She first looks down, gives a big exhale, and then looks up.
panel 4 - a shot from down below looking up at Ann. Ormer is shouting up at her, carrying his camera.
Ormer: "Ann! You doin' alright up there?"
panel 1 - Ormer gives a suspicious look, shading his eyes from the sun.
Ormer: "Not afraid of heights, are you?"
panel 2 - Ormer continues, this time without the suspicious look. The old woman is bewildered
Ormer: "Totally okay if you are, I don't want to get any of my actors hurt!"
Old Woman: "Actor??"
Ormer: "So, it's totally okay if we need to call the fire department."
panel 3 - the shot is not from above in the trees, Ann wobbles slightly as she starts getting to her feet. She stops him with, "No."
Chapter 2, pg 33 and 34 #AMELBURY
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#Amelbury New page(s): balileart.neocities.org?pg=25#showCo...
17.10.2025 03:40
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cover art for chapter 2 of the webcomic, Amelbury. the art is a fully rendered version of the final panel of chapter 1. the art showing Ann Ngo on a branch in a tree. She's trying to get a cat out of it for an old woman. The cat is above her, on another branch, looking down at her. Ormer and the old woman stand below at the base of the tree recording Ann's mission. The title of the comic is at the top of the page.
Chapter 2 Cover #Amelbury
16.10.2025 21:14
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panel 1 - Ann has lands on a branch after her jump. The cat jumps off her head and onto a higher branch.
panel 2 - She flops from hanging on only by her arms to laying onto the entire branch.
a splash page showing Ann's position on the branch with Everette above her on another branch. Ormer and the old woman are recording from below.
Amelbury Chapter 1, pg 31 and 32 #amelbury
16.10.2025 21:11
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panel 1 - a shot looking over the shoulders of Ann and Ormer at the old woman. Her cat is above her while she responds to the comment Ann had made earlier, "Little Everette must've climbed up while I wasn't looking."
panel 2-4 - Ormer begins by proudly announcing to the woman, "We can help you get your cat!" before then turning to Ann. After a pause, she sighs, knowing exactly what he meant.
panel 5 - A shot of Ann squatting in front of the tree.
A full splash page where Ann launches into the air using her boots. they let off a bass-filled BRMM. the cat is immediately startled by the giant woman hurdling towards them.
Amelbury Chapter 1, pg 29 and 30 #Amelbury
14.10.2025 16:25
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