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The sun is going down, at last. The sky is bruised and bloody. The century-long midsummer, once called endless, it is ending. Now will there come smoke-season, and the reaping, and the darkness. Now all the refugees of noon are huddled at the campfires. Itโs long indeed since theyโve seen nightโreal night at leastโand sunset Is just about the worst of omens they could dare imagine. At the campfires, as I pass them (In the darkness they donโt see me) I hear the lamentations and I wish them rest from grieving If all their griefs be honest (There are some dishonest mourners But not so many any more, by now theyโll have been dealt with) At the campfires when I pass them (for at many Iโm not welcome But at those where Iโm not welcome they donโt realize Iโm listening) I hear them telling stories of the doomed and barren cities, Of Babylons unspeakable, of never-finished towers, Of plagues and proclamations and of midnight mass hysteria, Of basilicas collapsing under unsuspected deluge, (How it was unsuspected I know not, but thatโs the story) Of Doggerland and Numenor and Camelot downfallen. Of promised end to history that never could have happened. Of Ragnarok that sunders all the veils in rage and grieving. Of Alaric the Visigoth who proved the word โEternalโ Is nothing but a word, when you apply it to a city.
Now Alaric the Visigoth was not some mere barbarian (If you had passed his campfire, in the darkness, youโd attest it) A veteran of the legions of the city he would pillage, He knew firsthand her hollowness. He knew the sun was setting: The wise in every epoch know that days donโt last forever, That sunset always comes. (At the campfires, as I pass them The children soon are sleeping, and the dogs with them are watchful Though not enough to scent me in the darkness, softly passing.) A city, just like all that mortals build, is not eternal. It has its dawn, it has its long midsummer, and its sunset. And history is not to be denied by mortal hubris: Let those who speak of endings take more care. Words have their meanings, Like any other weapon best be careful where you point them Best treat them as if loaded, and best discipline your trigger. Once drawn, a word like โEndโ cannot be put back in the scabbard Until it has drawn blood. I fear youโll find History is bloodless.
But the sun is going down, at least. Imagine if it didnโt. Imagine if this city found a way to be eternal. Imagine if the kind of men whoโve made it in their image Were suffered to end history, and make us live forever The kind of life they think we ought to live. No storied campfires. No many-colored flame. No winter cold, only a summer That never ends, and every day a hundredth-degree warmer. Weโd have no bread, no circuses, and not a private moment To know ourselves in one another, as is only human. Weโd hear only the stories that it profits them to tell us. Weโd hold our very lives in tenancy to countless landlords. Before the High Kingโs horses weโd be trampled to the granite Upon the streets, beneath the hooves, and this would not release us. And we would pray for Alaric the Visigoth to save us And bring at last a long delayed, a bruised and bloody sunset.
They are grieving for the city, at the campfires as I pass them. As well they should. And who am I to countermand their weeping? Aye, grieve for this, your city. But then rest from your grieving. The sun is set, the time for grief, like all the rest, is ended. There are worse fates than ending. There are direr things than downfall. And the campfires, as I pass them (If you see me in the darkness Remember that Iโve lived there, Lord, how long? Out in the darkness, And if I can survive it surely you can too) are kindled. And kindling is a sacred thing, and makes a sanctuary. And kindling is an act of hope, however frail and feeble. And kindling is the first thing you must do, to build a city. Already, at the campfires, as I pass them in the darkness (Both ones where Iโm not welcome and those where I join the circle With stories of my own to tell) they are exchanging stories. They may yet have enough of those to outlast all the darkness, Behold beyond belief another miraculous sunrise (Like Ararat, and Hoddmimโs Holt, and Alaricโs Disciples) And under it a city build. A new earth and new heaven. If so, I wish you joy of itโfor joy comes in the morningโ When I go, to the sunset, with my era that has ended.
Fall of the Western Empire
#Poetry
Ooh, I noticed you used this in my collection! Nice! ^v^
In case it's relevant @conradaltmann.com made these you don't have to empty your pockets to use.
Don't get me started on the professors who commonly teach courses for creative writing โ especially poetry โ in college. Of course, you already know my opinions on them. XD
My fatherโs old, his friends are gone.
He talks about their golden days,
At half his age, I nod along.
My fatherโs old, his friends are gone,
But counting mine the sums err on
The mounting side, a few each plague.
Now my old man, his friends are goneโ
He tells me tales, I mark the days.
#whalesong
A graphic titled "Anti-Capitalist Service Trade." It contains the following text box prompts: Name, "Is seeking services/items", "Is offering services/items", and contact.
I'd like to try to get something new going on writersky: Do you love making character art? Are you a skilled beta reader or proofreader? Are you good at making graphics or maps?
The proposal is this: we all have different things we excel at, so why not trade services with our fellow writers? ๐งต
Name: Michel-Vincent Corbeaux
Seeking: Illustration/Graphic Design (Posters), Translation (Englishโ>Any Language), Voice Recording (Poetry)
Offering: Poetry (SFW/English, length negotiable w/ any form), Critical Feedback (Poetry)
Contact: www.black-plume.com (Examples of my work are found here!)
Wasting words of distraction, whither wayward men Stagnate -- slavish faction -- sleeping in Mammon's den. Arise! Awaken to glory! inherit your throne, indeed! Of justice and courage, the story crafted will conquer greed. ~ Michel-Vincent Corbeaux
Here's a short poem I recently wrote, now in calligraphy! I even made the ink myself, too!
Some months ago, I was chatting with @corvid-conquest.bsky.social, and we ended up challenging eachother to each do a form we'd never done before.
I made him write a mathnawi, and he picked virelai... so this is what I came back with.
#poetry
Today we present โUn-Feathered Bipedsโ a poem by @corvid-conquest.bsky.social.
#FurryLit #Poetry
โ๏ธ YCH GIVEAWAY - COZY WINTER LOFT
(ALL SPECIES/ALL GENDERS) โ๏ธ
๐ฃ GIVEAWAY ENDS - Feb. 02/25
โจHOW TO ENTER:โจ
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3. Comment Your Characters Ref-Sheet Below
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Still Life: Ink on Table
(Critique Appreciated)
I happen to have a website now! ^v^
www.black-plume.com
So @corvid-conquest.bsky.social challenged me to write a Virelai with the specified subjects "the board game you played most in childhood" and "your feelings about your husband."
I think I did rather well.
#poetry
I see you already have me on that list! XD
@astraplanetshine.bsky.social ^v^
Thanks for honoring me on the podcast! I very much appreciate it! ^v^
Today we present โAgricola & Avarice,โ a poem by @corvid-conquest.bsky.social.
Read by @solh.bsky.social.
#FurryLit #PoetryMonth
Ref sheet commission for @corvid-conquest.bsky.social im really happy you have a ref sheet now! ^w^ #furry #art #bird #crow
Thanks, Astra! Always appreciate your work! ^v^
I'm late in saying this, but thanks Shiloh! ^v^
I uploaded the poem that @shilohskye.bsky.social commissioned from me! Thank you, Shiloh, once again! ^v^
Gareth, The Wolf Knight (Zweihander Proem):
www.furaffinity.net/view/54644150/
www.sofurry.com/view/2107608
www.deviantart.com/corvid-conqu...
Call for poetry submission, same text as in post and replies.
The Voice of Dog is looking for submissions for Poetry Month.
This April, we again want to feature furry poets and those who'd like to become furry poets.
I was there last year, and I'll be there again this one! ^v^
Out of curiosity, would any bilingual people here be interested in trying their skills in poetry translation for me?
Oh wow! Quite the praise, and also unexpected, but appreciated! ^v^
Poetry in Gothic Calligraphy with Crow in Negative Silhouette as Thumbnail Image
I have finally figured out an appropriate pricing for commissions, and I am thus now open for poetry commissions! Find more information at the links below:
www.deviantart.com/corvid-conqu...
www.furaffinity.net/commissions/...
www.sofurry.com/view/2075533
Thank you,
~ Michel-Vincent Corbeaux
Under the parabola of a plum,
The man turning into a glutton;
I chewed upon the plum too long,
The plum shallowed down into my stomach โ
It sang on taste buds, "Sweet! Delicious!"
Behold a gift designed to nourish.
Fortuna: [to Agricola]
"'T is always best to struggle truly free,
"Than bound and shackled to prosperity."
Illustrated by @astraplanetshine.bsky.social
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