It's like repainting a car that has no engine. It looks great, but it doesnβt actually drive.
That's why I like editing from "big to small."
First, focus on all the foundational story elements and ensure they're landing.
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It's like repainting a car that has no engine. It looks great, but it doesnβt actually drive.
That's why I like editing from "big to small."
First, focus on all the foundational story elements and ensure they're landing.
Some tough love I give my editing clients:
Pretty sentences won't fix a broken story.
When you first start revising your draft, there's no use making every sentence sparkle. Because those lines might be heavily revised, moved, or cut entirely!
If you're experiencing a creative block, I know a guaranteed way to overcome it:
Take a break.
But not just any kind of break. (No scrolling on your phone for two hours.)
Here are 3 tips for taking an intentional, creatively restorative break. π§ββοΈ
What's behind the success of novels like People We Meet on Vacation and The Housemaid?
Itβs not just the prose, the characters, or the plot.
Itβs how the authors manipulate time to keep readers hooked.
In this video, I reveal how you can apply this trick to your story. π
youtu.be/GSWj6xfC8wg
It certainly wasn't easy, but I'm so glad that I opened a new chapter in my life by writing a book.
How has writing a book changed your life?
"I proved I can achieve a difficult goal, letβs set another one."
When you do something this difficult once, you build the confidence to take on other difficult things β both inside and outside of writing.
You start thinking: What else could I do, now that Iβve done this?
You can query agents. You can self-publish. You can write another book. You can switch genres. You can build an audience around your stories or share your writing journey to inspire others.
Even if you choose not to show this book to another soul, you can say:
5οΈβ£ Iβve unlocked new possibilities
By writing a book, youβve opened a dozen doors that didnβt
even exist before.
If you shared any part of your journey β on social media, in a writing group, or in a personal conversation β then youβve likely inspired someone else already.
By spending hours deep in your bookβs world, you unearthed parts of yourself you didnβt even know were there. You discovered ideas you didnβt even know you had. You put pieces of yourself on the page and saw them in a new light.
And Iβm not so convinced you havenβt impacted anyone else.
4οΈβ£ Iβve impacted someone
Even if zero people have read your book yet, the first person your story impacts is you.
Thatβs not to say that you wonβt run into roadblocks with your next projects β you certainly will β but youβll come to each book from here on out more assured of yourself and your ability.
I didnβt keep up my writing schedule. I wrote sections that I ended up cutting completely. I struggled to make sure my tone was cohesive with my coauthorβs.
But thatβs the thing: nothing teaches you how to write like actually writing.
Itβs a muscle that only gets stronger if you train it.
3οΈβ£ I made mistakes and learned from them
Even though Iβve worked in the book industry my entire adult life, I made a million mistakes when writing my book.
Itβs such a vulnerable thing to put your thoughts, ideas, and story into the world.
And thatβs frankly why most people never do it. But Iβm so glad I did.
Word by word, you built an entire world. If youβre writing fiction, you breathed life into characters who didnβt exist until you imagined them.
If youβre writing nonfiction, you turned raw thought into a cohesive narrative that can change peopleβs minds and hearts.
2οΈβ£ I created something out of nothing
Itβs easy to forget how powerful it is to CREATE in a world that asks us to CONSUME constantly. And by writing a book, you created something from nothing.
And I think that simple decision to keep writing despite the doubt and discomfort builds a quiet strength.
It was a bunch of late nights alone with my laptop, rereading my words over and over again, doubting every single one of them, running up to wire on my self-imposed deadline.
Finishing a book requires an immense amount of perseverance, dedication, and effort.
1οΈβ£ It proved I can do hard things
Most people romanticize the process of writing, thinking itβll be a series of dreamy creative sessions where youβre at a desk in a gorgeous location with the words just pouring out of you.
But that's not what happened to me.
When these thoughts creep in, I try to reflect on all the ways Iβve changed β for the better β since writing my book.
Even if no one reads it, the process alone was worth it.
Here are the five ways writing a book has changed my life in ways I never even imagined. ‡οΈ
I wrote my very first book last year, and now that the release date is approaching, Iβm excited for sure, but alsoβ¦nervous. π¬
Is anyone even going to read it?
Will people find it valuable?
Or did I just waste a ton of time?
Which part of the editing process do you enjoy the most?
And honestly...I'm not the best person to sort out nitty-gritty grammar issues! That's because all of us editors have distinct talents and skills.
I'm a developmental editor who comes in at the first phase. And I LOVE working at this big-picture level to help writers deliver a strong emotional experience for the reader.
βοΈ Developmental Editing: Shaping big-picture story elements like plot, pacing, and character arcs.
βοΈ Line Editing: Refining the flow and clarity of the writing.
βοΈ Copy Editing: Correcting grammar, spelling, and consistency issues.
βοΈ Proofreading: The final check before publication.
Before it hits the shelf, a manuscript will go through multiple levels of editing, each serving a unique purpose.
If needed, it will go through multiple rounds of the same type of edit.
You'll also often work with different editors who specialize in the given phase you're in.
But many people (and writers) don't understand ALL the phases of editing that a book goes through and underestimate how much work happens before the proofreading stage.
So, let's break the editing process down! β¬οΈ
One of my biggest peeves when I tell people I'm an editor:
"Oh, so you catch typos! Can you proofread my ___?"
Editing a book is so much more than correcting grammar and spelling (though that is absolutely important too).