@tiffanygrimes
πΏ Editor & Web Designer for brave creatives @ Burgeon Design and Editorial π Iβm quite a bit more active on insta! www.instagram.com/burgeondesignandeditorial πͺ΄βοΈ www.burgeondesignandeditorial.com π»π www.sawyerelliot.com
My #RevPitShowcase materials are live! LET HER INHERIT RUIN features:
π πͺ½/π forbidden π
π enemies-to-lovers
π forced proximity,
he falls 1st
π gemstone magic & transformations
π mixed race rep
π mythical creatures of πΉπ
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#LitAgents #Editors
#RevPitClassOf25
Such a joy to work on this Thai-inspired adult romantasy by @eggqueenwera.bsky.social!
When forbidden magic binds their fates, Fa Ying and Tana must unearth the truth behind a royal assassination & decide whether love is worth the ruin it will bring. #RevPit
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Here it is! The #RevPit2025 Showcase is LIVE!!!
Congratulations to all of our authors and editors!
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omg sob. π₯Ήπ₯Ήπ₯Ή
Thank you for your excitement for a rewrite that was bigger than both of us expected, but I'm so proud of the direction this book has gone in and of you for all of your hard work!!!
(and yes all of the yang yang appreciation!!)
Talking about dramas is a must!! π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° It's been a pleasure working with you. Can't wait for the showcase!
Iβve been so sick but hopefully soon π
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And I wish we could give feedback on every single sub, but with the volume we received, it just isnβt possible. Thatβs why we created things like #10Queries: to offer insight on how weβre thinking, even if we canβt respond to everyone individually.
Now, if you donβt hear back and arenβt sure what your story needs next (or if it needs anything at all), it might be time to bring in a CP, freelance editor, or trusted reader with strong story instinctsβto get high-level feedback and see if your manuscript needs a deeper revision or is query-ready.
Great question! And youβre definitely not alone in wondering this!
Quick note: Many of us are still not done notifying for both our #RevPit #10Queries picks & finalists, so hang tight a little longer. We know the wait can feel like limbo, but we want to be intentional in how we respond.
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Aiming to get them emailed out by the end of the week! I'll post an update when I've sent out everything!
I would be honored to work with any of the authors and manuscripts subbed to me. Every single one showed talent, potential, and promise.
Not getting chosen for #RevPit doesnβt give you enough data to bury a project. Please donβt treat it like a final verdict.
Rooting for you all like mad!
Some authors donβt get chosen for #RevPit because their manuscript is already too polished. Some because the time constraints of the contest aren't a fit. Some because the editor had to choose one out of twenty they loved.
None of that is a reflection of your future in publishing.
#RevPit editors donβt select the most deserving writer or even necessarily the book with the highest chance of success. Editors choose one project that fits into their current bandwidth. It has to *need* work & be something we're excited to pour our time and energy into on top of our paid work.
I've seen a few subposts today that tell me this needs saying: #RevPit isnβt a contest that rewards the βbestβ book. Itβs one opportunity, shaped by timing, taste, and editorial capacity. Not a judgment on your future in publishing.
#RevPit Iβll be emailing #10Queries feedback throughout the week!
Editor Tiffany Grimes @tiffanygrimes.bsky.social has chosen SLOW BURN (Adult Romance) by Montana Beck as her runner-up. #RevPit
Very excited to work with @eggqueenwera.bsky.social on REBIRTH OF A CELESTIAL PRINCESS. π€©
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Without further ado, hereβs what youβve all been waiting for! Itβs winner and runners-up announcement time! #RevPit
as we get closer to #RevPit announcement time, here are some important reminders:
β¨οΈ sharing your work is brave
β¨οΈ the contest (and ALL of publishing) is super subjective
β¨οΈ "best manuscript wins" is not a thing
β¨οΈ you are unique and exceptional in ways only you can be
happy #RevPit day π
P20: A R. Strong sense of place and the humor threads naturally into the character's emotional state. To elevate the tension, consider anchoring the stakes a little sooner. What does the MC fear? What do they want? #RevPit #10Queries
Q20: A R. This query nails voice, tone, and setup. The stakes are hinted at but could be amplified for impact. Strengthening the hookβespecially what emotionally or thematically sets this romance apartβcould help it stand out in a crowded category. #RevPit #10Queries
P19: A R. The voice is smart, funny, and emotionally raw. Perfect for rom-com. Weβre pulled into the aftermath of heartbreak, but to heighten stakes, consider grounding us faster in what the MC wants now. Whatβs the turning point that will move her from heartbreak to action? #RevPit #10Queries
Q19: A R. This is a model queryβclear, voicey, and emotionally resonant. We get the genre, tone, stakes, and romantic arc up front, with just enough worldbuilding to anchor us. Every sentence earns its place. #RevPit #10Queries
P18: A R. To deepen immersion, consider grounding us more clearly in the charactersβ emotions and stakes within the action. What does the MC want in this moment, and what tension is driving the scene forward? #RevPit #10Queries
Q18: A R. Right now, the setup is overshadowing the romance. Try tightening the backstory and shifting the focus to set up the romance arc: what draws the love interests together, what stands in their way, and what's at stake if it falls apart? #RevPit #10Queries
P17: A R. The voice is charming and engaging, with natural banter and vivid sensory details. There's strong momentum, but consider anchoring us in the MCβs emotional goal earlier. What does she want internally? Whatβs she afraid to lose? Let that urgency carry us. #RevPit #10Queries
Q17: A R. Great concept, but the query could pop more with a hookier opening line and clearer stakes. Whatβs the cost if MC fails? Let the character's emotional arc shine as much as the premise. We have plenty more room to explore this. #RevPit #10Queries