active wip
What Becomes of
Still Waters
by Frankie Joy
Literary dark fantasy
thirty chapters outlined drafting started
the pitch
A woman from a line of madness finally proves she was never broken-the bog that has haunted her family for generations answers when she feeds it, crowning her in power. But when its hunger takes the woman she loves, she becomes something monstrous, lost to grief and still water.
Meanwhile, her lover's twin brother journeys toward the horror with a worn-out knight-two men deemed expendable by a kingdom at war, finding each other on throad. What waits at the end will demand they all learn the same truth: the only way to survive is to let go.
What Becomes of Still Waters
Frankie Joy
the characters
Lilijana and Rue
Lilijana comes from a line of madness, drawn to the bog as her grandmother before her. Rue has stood by Lilijana their whole childhood. It was no surprise when Rue kissed Lilijana at the bog's edge years ago. Their love was born from loyalty and grief, and now must survive the same.
Lukas and Sandro Lukas, burnt and blind in one eye, was deemed unfit for war. Sandro was a knight for the kingdom suddenly found expendable. Their love isn't fated-its consequence, earned mile by mile.
What Becomes of Still Waters
Frankie Joy
the opening
The ground squished, thick mud slipping between Lilijana's toes. A deceiving patch of moss floated to her left. She pivoted to the right, settling on firm earth. Reeds bowed, bent by a warm gust. It carried the distinct smell of Mrkava's summers: ripening rye, wild strawberries, junipers, and decay. The near-intoxicating sweetness drifted near the far edge of the village, where the pine grew small and twisted.
The bog lay there, only moss and water-so her mother often reminded. But it kept what it consumed. Generations ago her family's home was settled there, back when the bog was nothing more than a puddle. Now those weathered boards were buried deep in its soil. Her great aunt, too: wandered out on a waxing moon and never returned. She wasn't the only one in the matrilineal line to give to the bog. The first was a stillborn daughter.
What Becomes of Still Waters
Frankie Joy
WHAT BECOMES OF STILL WATERS
Two women, two men, and the bog at the edge of the village. Dual POV with f/f and m/m romantic arcs.
How much will Lilijana feed her madness? How long can Rue stand by her? Can Lukas and Sandro find purpose in one another?
#questpit #W #DF #LF
31.01.2026 14:13
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I was lucky enough to read Storm Struck last month and loved it!!! Agents, if you love pirates, fascinating magic systems, and steamy M/M romance, you need to be on the lookout for this one 👀🏴☠️ #QuestPit
01.02.2026 15:55
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Gothic text treatment with a red skeletal graphic overlay with a spooky, dark forest photograph background. Text reads "An Agent's Guide to the Banshee of Clan Murtagh, a gothic love story, 82,000 words, adult horror, by Anna Hirsch."
Tropes & comps: Irish folklore, she's the monster, generational trauma, only one grave. The yearning in the time of plague found in Hamnet by Maggie O'Farrell, Catholicism vs the Supernatural in The Possession of Alba Díaz by Isabel Cañas, the medieval horror of Between Two fires by Christopher Buehlman, the death-crossed lovers of Nosferatu directed by Robert Eggers.
The pitch: When Ciarán Murtagh hears the cry of his family’s banshee for the first time in a decade, he knows one of his own is fated to die. Yet, his family doesn’t believe his warnings, and why would they? The last time Ciarán heard the banshee, he didn’t tell a soul until after his younger cousin tragically died under his watch. He’s been the family pariah ever since.
Desperate for redemption, Ciarán hunts down the banshee in search of answers. She’s equal parts frightening and alluring, and in his struggle to confront her, he inadvertently triggers the banshee’s memories. Memories of when she was a servant of his household, decades ago—a woman named Deirdre.
In hopes of learning whose death she foretold, Ciarán tenuously agrees to help Deirdre remember who she was. They begin meeting by moonlight, and with every clandestine encounter, his macabre desire for Deirdre grows. When the devastating bubonic plague befalls the Murtagh household, and Deirdre’s memories reveal a dark scandal in the family’s history, Ciarán must decide whether to stay by his family’s side in their final hours or embrace the seduction of the death-bringer. But fate demands more than death, and Deirdre is no longer the only ghost cursed to haunt Clan Murtagh forever.
The first line: I was a boy of ten when I first saw death, but I'd heard her for years.
HAMNET x NOSFERATU
🖤 The black sheep of a powerful 14th-century Irish family falls in love with the banshee who’s haunted his household for generations—but as the bubonic plague closes in, he must choose between the living and the dead.
💌 SmoochPit 2025 Mentee
#QuestPit #Q #A #H #HFic
31.01.2026 05:00
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“Varos must choose between the life he thought he wanted and the love he thought he’d never have” UGH MY HEART!!! I love these two so much 😭
31.01.2026 19:52
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Image of a tall ship on the ocean with the title Storm Struck and the following text: A disgraced noble takes to the high seas to rescue a princess and win her hand in marriage, but falls in love with his surly sea captain instead.
The Pitch:
Varos Belaro spent his whole life training for a dueling tournament he just lost - along with all his friends, his good name, and his career prospects. However, when he finds out that the kingdom’s princess has been kidnapped by an infamous pirate and the reward for saving her is her hand in marriage, he sees a chance at redemption. With the title of prince of the realm on the line, his family quickly strikes a contract with the fastest ship on the seas, and Varos takes off on an adventure to rescue the princess and his future.
Kellan is the captain of the ship and a Stormrunner, a once-in-a-generation talent that can harness the power of storms for wind magic. After he saves Varos in a tempest, they collide in a steamy tryst, and Varos comes up with a plan to extend their fun by forming a gentleman’s agreement until they find the princess. But when the rival who ruined Varos’s life emerges with his own Stormrunner on the only other ship that can beat them, Varos and Kellan must race them to be the first to save the princess. Facing wild storms, duels, and pirate battles, Varos must choose between the life he’s always wanted and the love he never thought he’d have.
Image of a tall ship on the ocean with "for fans of" and then the cover of three books. The books are Sorcery and Small Magics, Swordcrossed, and A Marvellous Light.
The Vibes:
High Heat on the High Seas
Black Cat/Golden Retriever
Forced Proximity
Himbo Hero
Pirates!
Unique Magic System
High heat on the high seas in this M/M fantasy romance.
A disgraced noble takes to the high seas to rescue a princess and win her hand in marriage, but falls in love with his surly sea captain instead.
⭐ Selected for the 2025 Smoochpit Mentor Program
#Questpit #Q #F #R #RF #LGBTQ
31.01.2026 16:41
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A MEMORY OF MOONKISSED MALICE
Fantasy Dark Academia
Feminine Rage
Vampires
Corrupted Moon Magic
Villain Era Protag
Queendoms
Enemies to Lovers
Found Family
THE PITCH
18-year-old Alyss Veylas wishes to attend Nocturne Collegiate for one reason—revenge. Five long years after her sister was murdered by the school's guardian, she finally gets that chance. Armed with a Moon Fragment granting memory magic and the aid of her ex and his new girlfriend, Alyss must confront the woman who took away the person she loved most.
YA Gothic Fantasy
93,000 Words
CHAPTER ONE
The rain made it easier to rob his grave.
My shovel carved through the sodden earth, the water contorting into murky veins around its edge. Desperation drove each labored thrust, the burning ache in my muscles but an afterthought to the prize that lied in wait. Even the Valera Forest held its breath; the fog thick enough to smother the night's whispers. All was silent save for the spilling of soil under the deluge that drenched us.
Us.
As I lifted my gaze to the boy standing across from me, I found that word had lost all semblance of warmth.
FOR FANS OF...
The lush, gothic prose of...
A fantasy academia setting similar to...
A supernatural mystery like...
ONE DARK WINDOW X KATABASIS
Nocturne Collegiate is celebrated as a sanctuary from warring Queendoms and brutal vampires, but Alyss knows better—its guardian murdered her sister, and now she's come for revenge.🌙🦇⚔️
#QuestPit #OS #AG #YA #F
31.01.2026 12:08
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Shadowed man leaning against wall, snuffed out candle, woman made of stars, tropical garden with bridge, two hands, one made of light, clasping, dagger, tropical ruins at night, woman's face in the shadow, descending stone steps
An #agentsguide to SHADOW’S GIFT my JASMINE THRONE meets MASK OF MIRRORS character-driven political fantasy with crossover appeal.
🗡️Morally ambiguous FMC
🗡️Coercive theocracy vs mystical magic
🗡️Layers of surveillance & deception
🗡️Art as resistance
🗡️Sub-tropical world
#questpit #f #q #agentguide
31.01.2026 13:47
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Pitch: When the chosen Empress is assassinated, her disabled and gutsy ex-girlfriend must triumph over a dysfunctional family of ancient gods or submit to fulfilling the chosen’s grim fate as the gods’ eternal slave and weapon against mortals.
94,000 words Crossover Fantasy
Comps:
T. Kingfisher’s Nettle & Bone
Damsel (2024 film)
Hannah Kaner’s Godkiller
Margaret Owen’s Little Thieves
Moodboard:
Dark fantasy Victorian vibes with purple color composition.
Top row, left-to-right: a Byronic handsome man in black, a palace, a dark figure burning in hellfire, a masked female assassin of dark complexion holding a dagger, a serpentine forest trail at night marked with red flowers.
At the center, next to a silver plume, is the text: “This world, my dear, is the slaughterhouse of noble ideals.”
Bottom row, left-to-right: a dark gaslit street, a gaslit city blanketed in coal smog at night, a young woman in a Victorian gown, wrought-iron gates opened to a foreboding foggy estate in the dark, a trail of red petals leading to a dark stone temple gate.
Themes & Tropes:
- Forbidden Love - Hot Banter
- Feminine Rage - Anti-Chosen
- Found Family - Second Chances
- Dark Humor - Identity
- Friends-to-lovers - Faustian Bargain
- Choosing vs. being chosen
- Dual-Timeline
Representation:
- LGBTQIA+ - BIPOC
- Mental Health - Disability
- Neurodivergence - Chronic Illness
Excerpt:
A gaunt mouse snatched bread crumbs from my lunch tray. I did not have the heart to give her a name, afraid I might lose her, too.
The lingering scent of mud and mildew hung in the air, a long-forgotten tomb. The bed’s cast-iron rods dug into my ribs through the thin mattress. I clenched my jaw to keep my teeth from chattering and pulled the threadbare blanket tighter around my body, hugging my knees to my chest. It did little against the chill creeping into my bones. The raging blizzard had transformed the courtyard into a churning white sea, rattling the broken window shutters hanging askew.
I was not allowed visitors or to set foot outside. The faded floral pattern of the peeling wallpaper was my only reminder of life beyond these walls. The medications I was forced to swallow left a cotton taste in my mouth and a dull ache in my skull. At least no screams echoed through the halls today.
An empress with disability. A Dragon hoarding romance novels. A dysfunctional family of gods. Not the start of a joke, but Sy's undoing. When her ex, the chosen one, is murdered, feisty Sy fights the gods to escape a fate worse than death: becoming their eternal slave.
#questpit #Q #F #BIPOC #LBGT
31.01.2026 13:09
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Yesss!!! I live in an area with a lot of bogs and I have always been fascinated by them! I bet your book is amazing 😍
31.01.2026 13:44
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That first line gives me chills every time!!! 😍
31.01.2026 13:06
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An Agent Guide to GUMIHO
86,000 word adult folklore fantasy blended with horror and romance
By Jennifer Luce
The pitch:
Cursed with a vengeful gumiho, Mina has spent centuries feeding it souls to become a god—and now she needs just one more, but when she falls for her final target, she must choose: face her demons and sever the curse before the gumiho consumes her from the inside out, or achieve godhood and lose herself to become something truly monstrous.
For fans of...
SUCH SHARP TEETH by Rachel Harrison - physical transformation & emotional vulnerability
THE FOX WIFE by Yangsze Choo - East Asian Folklore
MY DEMON - Redemption through connection
THE GLORY - Morally gray anti-hero
First Lines
Bright droplets of red bloomed against the crisp, white snow.
A trail, unbeknownst to my victim, that would lead to his demise.
Hi #Questpit! Nearly done w/ SmoochPit revisions, here's GUMIHO, my Korean folklore-inspired adult fantasy blended w/ horror & romance!
✨️ Selected for the 2025 Smoochpit Mentorship Program
✨️ Big 5 Editor Interest
✨️ Won 3rd in the horror category of the 2025 PNWA Writing Contest
#A #F #H #R
31.01.2026 05:08
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Ahhh I have been on such a horromance kick lately and this sounds incredible! 😍
31.01.2026 12:59
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Background of fog moving over the treetops of a forest. Book title reads: LYDIA IS DEAD. 110,000 words, horromantasy, Adult/New Adult
Background is dark, blue water. Text reads: The Pitch. Lydia is dead, and Charlie knows who killed her.
Her prime suspect? Markus, enigmatic bachelor and Lydia’s ex- boyfriend. Determined to prove his guilt, Charlie launches her own investigation: seduce Markus and uncover the web of lies lurking in Gildervale’s supernatural shadows.
But as her attraction to Markus grows, Charlie's grip on reality starts to slip. Are these paranormal horrors real, or is she finally losing her mind?
Text reads: Book/TV Comps. Images include covers of popular books & TV including: Shapr Objects by Gillian Flynn, Hannibal TV Show, and Ninth House by Leigh Bardugo. Additional text reads: serial killer mystery, amateur sleuthing, cannibalism, toxic love, body horror, occult, magic and murder
Background is a small fire in the dark. Text reads: Themes & Tropes. Morally grey hero, flashback chapters, murder mystery, dark romance, supernatural, generational trauma, genre blending, magic & curses, witchcraft, cannibalism, magic tea, seances, heists, betrayal
💀LYDIA IS DEAD💀
#QuestPit #AgentsGuide #Q
Lydia is dead... and Charlie knows who killed her.
♥️ dark romance
🦷 magic & witchcraft
🌶️ seducing the enemy
🍽️ cannibalism curse
🫀 body horror
31.01.2026 12:00
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Those comps!!! This sounds incredible 😍
31.01.2026 12:57
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A shadowy school building, stars in the sky, and the text: an agents guide to the bells of le fay, adult dark academia fantasy, A. J. Sable
The silhouette of a woman holding a ball of light in front of trees. The text reads: pitch, The price of magic is monstrous-literally. Lola Knight didn’t mean to murder her best friend. When her violent and volatile magic spirals out of control, instead of punishment, she’s enrolled in an elite magical academy to seek control before it kills again. But there she finds herself at the centre of a monstrous mystery; one that threatens the future of the entire witching world.
A spell book lying open amongst candles and a mirror. The text reads: tropes, sapphic enemies to lovers, female rage, elite magical university, secret society, body horror, underworld realm.
The shadow of a woman standing before a giant misty creature. The text reads: with the cathedral-like academy behind her, the gothic towers soaring above the treetops, it felt like she was in a fairy-tale. But if that were true, she was no princess. She was the monster they had to defeat.
A DEADLY EDUCATION x KATABASIS
The price of magic is monstrous—literally.
When Lola Knight accidentally murders her best friend, instead of punishment she is enrolled in a magical academy to seek control before it kills again, or consumes her…
#QuestPit #Q #A #F
31.01.2026 12:42
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Hiiii fellow Julianne 🥹 I love everything about this! Those comps are so good 👏🏻
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When a noblewoman helps a condemned pirate escape prison so his sentient ship can find her missing brother, she never expects to fall for the criminal—or to discover that he caused her brother’s disappearance in the first place.
#questpit #A #RF #litagents #writingcommunity #amquerying #romantasy
31.01.2026 12:45
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"An agent's guide to THE BOG PRINCE by Julianne M, a 99k word YA fantasy romance."
The pitch...
Eighteen-year-old Everin Lockett’s dreams of returning home from ruthless Wyverith College are shattered when she manifests a forbidden necromancy magic that reanimates the bog body of her kingdom’s lost prince. If the college discovers the truth about her abilities, she will be conscripted into their brutal army,
doomed never to see her family again.
Desperate to guard her secret, Everin strikes a deal with the long-lost Prince Byrnan: if he helps keep her power hidden, she will help him solve his centuries-old murder. But when Byrnan’s quest for justice could be the very thing that endangers her last hope of going home, Everin will need to confront the true cost of
falling for a lost prince with nothing left to lose—and a kingdom to reclaim.
Pictures of book and album covers in ornate antique frames. The text reads:
For fans of...
Yearning and bog bodies (Hozier's debut album)
Dark academia and lyrical prose (A Study in Drowning and Curious Tides)
Haunting gothic atmosphere (One Dark Window and Florence + the Machine's Lungs album)
Slow-burn romance (Divine Rivals)
Snippet...
A fork of lightning split the rain-soaked sky in two, and the ground trembled with a deafening clap of thunder. But even after the rumbling faded, the bog still shuddered beneath me, swelling and quaking like a pair of lungs drawing their dying breath. I lurched away, my heart jolting against my throat as I scrambled back through the mud.
Another crack of lightning.
And in its wake, silhouetted against the flash of violet light—
A single grasping hand,
clawing its way out of the earth towards me.
In honour of #QuestPit and the upcoming #SmoochPit showcase, here's an updated #agentsguide for THE BOG PRINCE, my upper #YA #RF about a necromancer who reanimates the bog body of her kingdom's long-lost prince. 💀👑
Maybe some secrets are better left buried... 🖤 #agentguide #Q
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Omg 🥹 This is so kind of you, thank you so much Corinne! ❤️
18.08.2025 11:21
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#YA with crossover appeal // BRIDGERTON x DRACULA
✨6 ms requests✨
🦷His life is at stake for biting her
🦇Her life is at stake for surviving it
👑All she wanted was to find family, now she has to 𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐯𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐦
🩸Blood is thicker than water… 𝑏𝑢𝑡 𝑡𝑎𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑠 𝑚𝑎𝑦 𝑣𝑎𝑟𝑦.
#PosterPitQ #SPF #R #H #PosterPit
16.08.2025 12:45
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Lovers to enemies??? I am so sat for this 😍
16.08.2025 13:10
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A #NA dual-POV #F #R where These Violent Delights meets Arcane.
Featuring:
🥀 A firebrand FMC from the slums
🥀A gilded MMC with blood on his hands
🥀 Class war meets monster horror
🥀 Fated mates with a twist
🥀 He'd do anything for her
🥀2 publishers interested / 10 manuscript requests.
#PosterPit #Q
16.08.2025 12:49
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A mock movie poster for a book. The background is an overlay of a close-up of a beach and the tree line of a misty forest.
The Images show:
- Outline of a woman with a sword
- Outline of a man with a bow and arrow
- Outline of an eagle
Text across the top reads:
GRUMPY x SUNSHINE
INSPIRED BY ATLANTIS
SLOW BURN WITH a chilli
LOST MAGIC, all of these with 5. Stars
Title reads: A kingdom to drown me, a romantasy novel by Emma Al-munshi
QUERYING SOON
Tagline is: Will the waves of a broken kingdom come crashing down on Mona Al’Maii
Then a mock up of a film rating that reads NA, Contains Mild 'Spice" mild violence and some scenes that readers might find exciting/terrifying
Introducing the #PosterPit premiere of…
A KINGDOM TO DROWN ME
The Knight and the Moth x Heavenly Bodies
Will the waves of a broken Kingdom come crashing down on Mona Al’Maii?
☀️ Grumpy x Sunshine
🌊 Sunken kingdom, hidden beneath the ocean
🌟 Magical politics
⚔️ Quest
#W #F #R #NA #RF
16.08.2025 04:00
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I love the Tourette’s rep 🥹 this sounds amazing!
16.08.2025 13:09
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Titled “WHERE MEMORIES BLOSSOM”. Poster has a blue background featuring flowers. Art includes four young adults: one girl with braided black hair and blue eyes wearing an old-fashioned blue dress, one girl with black hair in a bun and a pink shirt, one boy with orange hair and a brown vest, and one boy with long brown hair and a red cape. YA COZY FANTASY. FOUND FAMILY. Directed by Abigail Wadlington and repped by Rebecca Williamson.
TANGLED X ANASTASIA
In a Swiss realm where people forget their worst memory, an orphan with Tourette's recruits a flirtatious thief to help restore her forgotten past.
🪻Found Family
🪻Disability & LGBTQ Rep
🪻Cozy Setting
🪻Swoony Romance
#PosterPitAG #PosterPit #F #YA
16.08.2025 12:24
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This is SO stunning!!! What a beautiful poster!
16.08.2025 13:08
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Image shows the close-up of a young woman laying amongst plants in a jungle. Her mouth and upper chest spattered in blood, though no wounds are visible.
Text is as follows:
A Film by Alex Baker
Gwen Dale as Wendy Darling
Roseline Rivière as Capt. Hook
Enemies to Lovers
Butch/Femme Pairing
Pan-pires & Pirates
Spicy Sapphics
Hurt & Comfort
Support Women's Wrongs
"An Education in Malice X Peter Pan"
- Movie Reviewer
FOREVER IS A VERY LONG TIME
What Really Happened After Neverland
Once Gwen was called Wendy. She was promised love. All she lost was her humanity.
Once Hook was called Rosie. She was promised adventure. All it cost was her family.
Together, maybe a cranky immortal & a smug pirate can find a thing they didn’t know was missing.
#PosterPit #PosterPitW #A #F #H #LGBT
19.04.2025 18:49
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Such a cool concept and poster! You nailed this 😍
16.08.2025 12:42
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A movie poster, at the top is the title “Hell Is Work” and underneath it a tag line “The Devil is in the details”
The background is red with a light red graph showing a plummeting arrow representing a failing business.
In the foreground is a three pronged Devil’s pitchfork with a halo around the central tine.
Sitting on the curved crook of the right tine, nonchalant, with one arm wrapped around the tine is a black silhouette of a man wearing a suit and tie. His legs dangle casually above a field of flame.
On the curved crook of the left tine, staring at the other man, is a white figure of a man with wings spread, casually playing footsie with the other man.
At the bottom is the words “A novel by Zed Prospero”
THE OFFICE x GOOD OMENS
Virgil Mora has three months to turn around a vampire-ran Ohio gas station to restore Heaven’s faith in Hell and save his boss, Lucifer, the angel he’s fallen for.
Before his past mistakes come back to haunt him. Literally.
#PosterPit #W #A #C #F #LGBT
16.08.2025 03:52
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I loooove the spooky gothic vibes of this! Gorgeous 😍
16.08.2025 12:41
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