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Day 9
Iron Maiden - Isle Of Avalon
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Day 8
Hawkwind - Motorway City
I'm ok thanks 😀
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People liked the atmosphere at the start of the mission.
They were able to keep up with who was doing what.
It went at a nice pace and no-one found it boring.
Very informative and well researched, but not so it was a boring info dump.
A couple of sentences need a bit of work to tidy them up.
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Heya Emily, how are you feeling?
As promised a report on what people thought of my WW1 story.
The only real criticism was when I listed the names of the soldiers in the squad, it was "meh", so that needs a bit of work. A few typos, nothing serious.
Continued...
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Day 7
Genesis - Dreaming While You Sleep
How are you doing?
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Day 6
Fear Factory - Zero Signal
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Day 5
Entombed - Out Of Hand
What-ho 😀
🫂 Yes it's not good at the moment.
If you would like, you're welcome to read the few bits of writing I've done recently. They're in Word documents 🙂
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Day 4
Duran Duran - The Wild Boys
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Day 3
Cathedral - Ride
Thanks Emily, I'll let you know how it goes. 😀
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Day 2
Balance of Power - Higher Than The Sun
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Day 1
Absolva - Never A Good Day To Die
I've finished editing the WW1 piece, it's now just under 2400 words. 😀
I've submitted it, so next session is Friday, hopefully we'll go through it then.
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Day 28
Rick Wakeman - Tell 'Em All You Know